Rated 3 stars *** ebook. Thomas & Mercer. 2022.
New York City in 1880 is a city of contrasts. The squalid conditions of those struggling for survival in its crime-filled tenements are contrasted with the genteel lives of the rich. Twenty-two-year-old Elizabeth van den Broek comes from a well-heeled family, but pretends she’s a regular New Yorker because she has a job her mother hates, and is not pining because she’s not a member of Mrs. Astor’s “Four hundred.” Occasionally she remembers her fancy apartment, rich clothing, and job are all a result of benefitting from her father’s name and wealth, but quickly relegates such thoughts to the back burner because she takes a train to work and doles out dollars and change here and there to those less fortunate.
As the first female crime reporter with the Herald newspaper, Elizabeth faces scorn from many who believe she doesn’t belong in a man’s job. Despite their disdain she’s determined to prove herself by figuring out the identity of a serial killer who is murdering prostitutes and leaving clues related to Egyptology. What she doesn’t know is that the killer has decided it’s time for Elizabeth and him to get a little closer.
I would have given this book 2 stars but, since I like historical fiction and it talked a lot about aspects of life in New York City during the 1880’s, I upped it to 3 stars. The reason I wanted to give it 2 stars was because too many events were tossed into the mix that didn’t have satisfactory endings or didn’t belong with the narrative. See below my spoiler alert if you want to read more about what I mean.
I will leave it up to you Adults to decide if you want to read it or not.
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I didn’t like how Elizabeth was assaulted with no follow through on solving the crime. Also, young John Astor had nothing to do with the storyline, so I have no idea why he kept being included. In addition, what’s the deal with Simon Sneed? He was introduced as “a sleek, slippery sort of person who seemed to leave a trail of slime in his wake, like a slug.” Elizabeth said she felt his eyes on her from her first day at work, and he made her feel “confused, flustered, and unsure of herself.” Lawrence puts him in almost every chapter, with Elizabeth reverting to the opposite of the strong female character she’s supposed to depict. I don’t understand what the point was of him leering and Elizabeth falling apart over it. Wasn’t she supposed to be a strong woman defying all the odds? Anyway, these are just a few of the issues I had with this book.