“Unfolding” Jonathan Friesen

Rated 1 star * ARC. To be published January 31, 2017. Blink. 275 p.

unfoldingAll his life Jonah has loved Stormi while hating his own scoliosis and epilepsy. Some in his little town of Gullary, Oklahoma are leery of her because she sees things before they happen, while others love her. Mixed in with his constant thoughts of Stormi, and his bouts with epileptic attacks, is a mystery surrounding a secret group of men called The Circle and an old prisoner.

I couldn’t get into this book, finding Jonah’s wandering narrative to be sleep inducing and the storyline too far fetched for my liking. Maybe one of you will enjoy it, so I will leave it up to you to Decide if You Want to Read it or Not.

 

 

 

“The alienation of Courtney Hoffman” Brady Stefani

Rated 1 star * ARC. Published June 7, 2016. SparkPress.

TheAlienationOfCourtneyHoffmanCourtney used to love being with her grandfather, listening to his strange stories about aliens visiting Earth, until he tried to drown her when she was just a little girl. Now that she’s 15 years old, she still hasn’t come to grips with the traumatic events of that day.

When her childhood imaginary friend reappears in her mind, and aliens begin to constantly attempt to communicate, Courtney is sure she’s going insane. A new friend convinces her to visit a doctor who understands aliens and who will solve her problems. Before she knows it, Courtney is involved in a race to help the aliens save the world from destroying itself.

Courtney was so immature. I lost count of how many times she pulled her hair in frustration, and I don’t know any 15 year olds who pull their hair. Her friend Agatha was 19 years old and her vocabulary, which consisted of saying the word “dude” in every sentence, was grating and just as bad.

Courtney is 15, has a 19-year-old friend, says bad words, and has a mother who doesn’t listen to anything she says. That means it has to be a YA book. Right? Wrong! The storyline was boring and not believable, the characters were flat and immature, and it could have easily passed for a lower middle grade book. I was looking for an interesting YA book, but this was not that book. A sequel is planned, but I won’t be reading it. I’m sorry I read this one.

I didn’t like it, but will leave it up to you to decide if you want to read it or not.

I received a digital copy of this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

 

“All these perfect strangers” Aoife Clifford

Rated 3 stars *** ARC. Ebook. To be published July 12, 2016. Random House.

AllThesePerfectStrangersIn the late 1980’s a murder was committed in Pen’s small hometown when she was only 15, which implicated her and her best friend Tracey. It’s now 1990, and she is seeing a psychiatrist for some murders that happened at her University. Using her doctor’s suggestion, Pen decides to keep a journal to recount events in her life so she could get to the root of her real problems.

Pen’s diary goes back and forth in time describing the current situation in her hometown, then skipping back to her life at University where someone is attacking females with a screwdriver, and where drugs, sex and drinking run rampant and unchecked. Occasionally Pen’s diary jumps even further back in time to give readers glimpses of her time with Tracey, but that timeframe is not as well developed.

The author cleverly weaved in secrets and lies as people were dropping like flies, which made me suspect practically everyone. I enjoyed trying to figure out what was happening, but I did not like the way the book ended. Are readers supposed to guess at what happened in the last chapter, or is the author planning on writing a sequel? I really hope not, but if she isn’t going to write one why did she leave readers dangling off the edge of a cliff?

I will recommend this book with some reservations. If it weren’t for the ending, and not getting clear answers to my many questions about Pen and Tracey, I would have given this book 4 stars. Its murky ending lowered it to three stars.

Recommended for Adults.

I received this book from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.

“The Revenge of Seven” Pittacus Lore

Rated 4 stars **** ebook. 2014. Lorien Legacies, book #5. Harper (Harper Collins). Includes three excerpts from “I Am Number Four: The Lost Files titled “Return to Paradise,” “Five’s Legacy,” and “Five’s Betrayal.”

TheRevengeOfSevenElla has been kidnapped by Setrákus Ra, is a prisoner aboard his spaceship, and finds out she’s actually his granddaughter. Meanwhile John, Sarah, Sam, Malcolm and Adam are holed up trying to plan their next move after the disaster in Chicago while Six, Marina and Nine are trying to find their way out of Florida swampland where they’d been ambushed by Five. Eight has been killed and taken by the Mogs, but Marina is determined to find a way to rescue his body from them.

Despite being separated and facing grim odds, the remaining Loric are desperate to figure out a way to use their legacies to stop the Mogadorians from invading Earth. With each passing day Setrákus Ra’s evil plan gets a step closer to becoming reality, and it will take all of their combined power to stay a step ahead of the Mogs to survive one more day and save Earth.

This latest book in the “I am Number Four” series is full of the usual Mog fights and Loric shows of power. An interesting twist, along with a very frustrating cliffhanger ending, will leave readers eagerly clamoring for Book #6 which won’t be released until 2015 and is portrayed as THE final book in the series. I’ll believe it when I read it.

Recommended for readers aged 14 and older.

“Tabula Rasa” Kristen Lippert-Martin

Rated 5 stars ***** ARC. ebook. To be published September 23, 2014. Egmont USA.

TabulaRasaSarah was patiently waiting for her last brain surgery. Finally she would be relieved of all the memories that had been clogging her mind and would be free to reinvent herself as a new person. The hospital she was in had the latest technology and the best nursing care available, so Sarah wasn’t worried. Everything was going to be just fine.

On the last day of her surgery, everything was going as planned until a power failure caused it to be postponed. Within a matter of hours, she’d regained part of her memory, began fleeing for her life from an army of trained soldiers sent to kill her, found herself falling in love with a strange hacker dude, and uncovered heartbreaking memories which revealed a deep, dark secret about her past.

Lippert-Martin’s dystopian, action-packed, thriller adventure will have its readers on the edges of their seats as they eagerly read to find out what will happen next to Sarah. Each cliffhanger chapter ending reveals a new key to the mystery, making it impossible to put down the book until it’s all finished.

Highly recommended for ages 12 and older.

“The Tesla Gate” John D. Mimms

Rated 2 stars ** To be published July 10, 2014. ebook. ARC. Premier Digital Publishing.

Edited on April 5th. Now Rated 3 stars *** (see explanation at bottom of review)

TeslaGateThomas Pendleton loves his wife Ann and son Seth, so works long hours for them. He feels guilty missing birthday and family time but knows this will help them have the money they need to be comfortable in the future. However all is not well, and a strange cosmic storm appears which somehow causes ghosts to appear visible.

However all is not well as the government has devised a plan to get rid of these “Impals” (impalpables) as they’ve been renamed which is similar to what was done to the Japanese Americans during World War II. As Tom has a strong connection to one of them, he will have to use everything at his disposal to make sure this particular “impal” is protected.

“The Tesla Gate” has a semi interesting storyline, and leaves much to the reader’s imagination such as how did the government figure out iron was the only thing that could contain an Impal?

NOTE: On April 5th I received a note from the publisher discussing various discrepancies I mentioned in my Spoiler Alert below (DO NOT READ THE SECTION BELOW IF YOU DON’T LIKE SPOILERS) Thus since I didn’t know the book was a trilogy, and the errors I mentioned had been corrected in the final version, I will change my review from 2 stars to 3 stars *** because it really was a good storyline and, since the issues I mentioned were corrected and others will be explained in later books, it deserves a chance to be read.

Recommended for Adult readers.

NOTE: SPOILER ALERT. DO NOT READ BEYOND THIS SECTION.

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The author had a huge discrepancy not caught by an editor. After his wife and son died, Tom thought back to their final days and remembered how she suffered a low blood sugar attack on their way home from a picnic causing their car to strike a tree, where they died instantly. However, several chapters later he laments the fact they both drowned. I was left scratching my head. First, how do you get low blood sugar when you just finished eating lunch? Secondly how do you die in a car accident yet several chapters later have drowned?

Additionally the title “The Tesla Gate” does not adequately describe what’s happening in the book, as the gate is only mentioned in the final pages of the book. I think the author could have thought of a title more in tune to the fate of the Impals along with Tom’s adventures with his son.

Edited April 5: I received the following comments from the publisher: “I would like you to know that due to being up against a pressing deadline, the ARC was released prior to editing. The discrepancies you caught were corrected in the final version to be published in July. Also, the Tesla Gate is a trilogy. This will be made clear in metadata before release. Things you did not feel were explained, such as the gates and iron, are going to be addressed more thoroughly in the following books.”

“Five’s Legacy” (Lorien Legacies: The Lost Files #7) Pittacus Lore

Rated 4 stars **** HarperCollins. 2014. ebook. (includes excerpt from “The Fall of Five.”)

IAmNumberFourIn this latest novella with characters from the “I am Number Four” series, readers are told the back-story of Number Five.

Brought up by his cepan Rey, Number Five is portrayed as lazy, selfish, immature and self absorbed. After Rey dies, he escapes their desert island and lands in Miami. From there he slowly lets himself slide to the dark side, finally becoming the person he was destined to become in “The Fall of Five.” 

Fourteen-year-old and older fans will be delighted with this latest addition to the series.